Very well written, i write very similar stuff since it seems my life has been turned upside down

Good rhyme scheme going lots of sad emotions written you may want to try spacing it a bit but other than that good job!

Hey Sierra,

I love this poem. I can feel every word you wrote. Beautiful writter

A lonely poem but you are not alone

x

Sad but beautifully written.

Sad but beautifully written.

Wow! EVERY line, I was thinking to myself, is this me in this poem?! I could relate and I loved it! This is how I lived for 4 years and I'm finally free of it! Thank you for this beautiful poem! :) Keep it up!

Wow... it makes me think!!
how to describe your poem?

"A beautiful sad emotions that ends in brutal destruction"

you are talented.. keep it up..

"Put on a smile and hide the tears
It's been my secret for many years"

my favorite lines out of the whole poem. those just stuck out to me. i do the same thing. just hiding all the pain. The poem was amazing. so well written and very good flow. Great job!!!
5/5