Seriously this poem is REALLy inspiring..I really love the way you ended it, and its relation with the title. I REALLy loved the word choice..and the expressions..
nominated no bet!

:( EROR

You have already voted 3 times this week. Please, go back to the poem.

NEXT week then :/

XD oh man she is great..lol a nana and a nano.funfun

6000 years of war..
ALL of recorded history,
and still no Peace..
perhaps this is a clue?

I very much appreciate your 'point' here...

"Merely dwelling in the sense-world's light
Will never solve soul's riddle or soul's plight;
The world and life we will only understand
When to spirit heights we strive, ascend!"

-J.W.Goethe...from Faust

The written word can indeed be used in many ways, Micheal.

I truly love this poem, nice format as well..a Rictameter if I am not mistaking?

Well done, well done indeed!

5/5 Ingrid

A very powerful write for a short poem. I liked reading it a lot. I do not have any critique so my only tip for you is to keep on doing what your doing because if this poem is anything to go by you are a good poet

5/5