Wow Sibs. Just WOW. I really need to get you in my head more. Maybe I could just borrow some of your awesomeness?? I'll give it back in a year or two...

I LOVE the image of the birds in your hair. Very descriptive. I might have to go back and read it all over again.

//Birds tangle in my hair and
scratch my temples with their claws-
// amazing ...
I am in awe at the imagery you ahve presented here... so unique and thoughtful...

brilliantly written

Congratulations on a well deserved win!

A truly beautiful piece of work!

I take it you don't like winter? :) I don't either... it's depressing much like your poem. I must say though, you are the queen of similes, metaphors, and analogies. The Queen! The first idea in which you compared winter to the stale air of an empty waiting room = p e r f e c t i o n.

Congrats on your win :)

Darkly Depressive and
BRILLIANT.

Interestin but to me the last verse dose not fit to well.