Sourav
What a beautifuly sad piece you have penned. When you lose someone you love that deeply it is hard not to wish them back. Depression can get hold of you and pull you down where you don't see the sunshine or hear the birds sing. It blinds you to everything around.
Great job!

There is a heaviness of sadness in each line..it is difficult to cope when you lose the one you love..beautifully sad..

This brought tears to my eyes, what love when even death can't touch it's beauty. You have written the meaning of forever
wonderful poem

Very sad when you lose someone you love even though the world around you lives on

Sourav,
Very delicate and touching
Love Denied too is beyond question Eternal.Beautiful attempt