Good job!

Thank You SiSter! =)

Great!! i like it
some times we really don't know if we should be happy or sad but it's life and all things in it have two side and pain is one of those side
nice work sara painful but sensetive and true:)))

Awwww. such a sad poem... i really enjoyed. and for one second i thought about my uncle who died few years ago. i still think about him and miss him alot in my life... its very heart touching sad poem.. i always love simple poetry as it is..

Jazakallahu khayran! :')

Great job slow flow nicely done
inshallah in heaven =)

Insallah,god bless you man! :')

Such a sad poem... God bless you girl. .. Very well penned x

Oh, very sad...nonetheless, it is an awesome poem:)

Great job my friend, you succeeded really to transfer all ur sad feeling to the poem, so it really well expressed ur feeling.

well done Sarah,and sorry for this sadness ,I can really touch it strongly dear

Sad write but a so beautifully penned indeed... nice :)