Truly Captivating. the picture that this poem shows is like that of a movie preview. If it would be a movie after reading this poem I would watch it twice. Truly Amazing!

I meant for that to be "Deep within the trees." I will make the correction quickly.

Follow me in the river is exactly as it should be. Not to the river, follow me IN. As in, we're walking in the river; "Up the windy stream."

"Follow me in the river,
Up the windy stream."

Thank you for your criticism. :)