You are one of the few on this site who can translate so much with so few words. The power in this poem is plain for all to see. Oh and the last line just caps it off brilliantly...

I really like this, your word choice was very nice without being overcomplicated and I really like the closing line. Great work Melissa.

Can i this time say nothing..and only say.. u are my miracle..!!

never
stop
writing!

Congrats on your win :)

Wow!! I love it... you created interesting imagery that went well with the poem. Congratulations on the win! =)

Great job!

I think I like it more, and I get more out of it, every time I read it. And that's a good thing. :)