This was such a haunting write, but so cleverly expressed. My only suggestion would be to not have so many shaky line stanzas, you have only a few words at a time and with a poem of so great a structure, it weakens the piece. Try fuller stanzas, combining for effect if that is what you are aiming for.

"Her worlds scream
murder"

Didn't you mean words here?

"Her blood whispers
to be free."

- this is very dark, and this piece you have penned to me is seen quite uniquely. I have definitely heard of murderers and men who take women for prisoners because they 'love' them, but you bring such emotional aspects into it, from a shaken side. The thought of blood whispering freedom is amazing, striking and heart-wrenching.

Good work, keep writing please!
God's blessings.