An original idea, the eyes of another and what you would say to them. The eyes are the thing that shows the world our feelings and the depth of our emotions. Well done.

Nik
Great piece.

You were meant to see
life through the eyes
of the living...not a shadow

They say the eyes are the window to the soul. How nice it would be if we could take the pain from others who have seen and felt so much pain.
Excellent!
Love Cindy

One's eyes say a lot of things...it carries a
thousand word like a picture. I really like this read..deep as well as sentimental..excellent!

Teach me the ways of a
lover so that I may know
what it's like to feel
such despair

^^ Great lines! I really really liked this part!

You were meant to see
life through the eyes
of the living...not a shadow
^ Unfortunately a lot of people live their life with blinders on and don't see through eyes of "the living" so to speak!...

This was beautifully written with a hint of sadness. Loved it!