Comments : Dreams Are For People

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Again nice work. I get the impression that the puppet is really a person attached to that string of the past and lets the past and other people control their life.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nik
    This is such a beautifully sad piece.

    Will someone ever find you
    and release you from this
    string called the past?
    Let your feet fall to the ground
    and walk you to your future...

    That's just a dream--

    But only people have dreams
    and your just a puppet.

    Sometimes we have so much pain in our lives it feels like we are tied down by the people that hurt us. One day your feet will touch the ground again.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This reminds me of a wooden puppet a
    manequin standing there like a show but
    with deep feelings which are ignored..a touching write.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Touching write... the ending is so powerful ... makes a strong point.
    well written