Comments : Like the Flowing River

  • 13 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Absolutely beautiful. I too am in love with the line...
    At time my feelings overwhelm,
    Must be dammed or drown

    This couplet sums up the poem in its entirety.
    Very nice write.

    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I love what you and the others came up with regarding the title of our club..what an amazing verse..full of imagination and wonders ;)..

    great word chhoice, and absolute wide imagery.
    Perfect piece

    5/5
    my next week's nomination