WOW...I mean what an amazing piece of art; what I love about your poems is that I KNOW nothing ..is ever forced..with fluent imagination and adorable meaning..
amazing poem Larry..Amazing sir :)

From the intimacy of my public life
I hide you away fearing theft;
^^
larry this is a very strong opening..left
a very huge impact..outstanding word choice..

Continue to postpone that moment
When you carry on without me.
^^I think if you should take the capitalization out of all the 1st words of the 1st lines..they make it hard for the eye to read..however these 2 lines..just so sad..but beautiful!!

Noone knows about us but the cat,
^^
typo :) you mean None ?
Who simply gazes, eyes slitted,
As we pull the covers on the day,
Wresting cares beyond solution.
^^^^
wwwwwwooooooooaaaaaaahhh
what a very creative way to say this rather
than just using the one absolute cliche word..
very creative..

Your interstitial love permeates
All my time, alone or companied,
Superimposed background adding
Depth unheard, unseen, beloved.

^^^
adores the emotions in this ending..amazing word choice..and just fabulous piece LArry...
the only thing that sets me off..is how u capitalize each 1st letter..it's a bit distracting..but

5/5..a real poet

My @#%¤ cell phone has lost my comment. As for capitalization, blame old school nuns who raised me. I'll try to loosen up a bit.
noone: typo, yes: no one
Again, thanks for the suggestion

Haha llooll..sorry forgot to rate XD

"No one knows about us but the cat,
who simply gazes, eyes slitted,
as we pull the covers on the day,
wrestling cares beyond solution."
^^^ This is my favorite stanza. The imagery you created talking about the cat was wonderful. And those last two lines (of this stanza) baffle me. I'm trying to make sense of it all, trying to see the hidden meaning. What you are trying to say, what you want the person reading this to get out of it, but I don't think I can. I'm guessing a secret or hidden love. If it is, you described it wonderfully. The diction you used really was great. It's one of those things you see and say "Man, I have got to learn how to do that, that's awesome." I can't say anything good about this poem. It's just too amazing for my little brain to wrap around it.
One of my favorites, and going on my favorite list.
Pleeeeeeeeasssseeeee Keep Writing :)
5/5
-Erna

Given your age, I'm actually comforted that the last two lines of the stanza puzzle you. [You are the same age as my youngest.]
I do believe your talent is astounding, so I am particularly thankful for your praise.

Wow! Larry this poem is so beautiful and well-written! I must say that the flow of the poem was so beautiful and it made sense throughout! I really enjoyed it! I must agree with Erna and Nana!!
I liked the stanza about the cat, it seems like a small detail that made an interesting impact on the poem! Greaaaatttt job =D

Lovely....

This is a great poem. I loved it!