I'm proud of you!!! :D

I like non- rhyming poems, they aren't really easy to make, but you nailed it.

I can relate to the message too, I sometimes feel like a whole hour has passed because my mind took a short vacation and then I see the clock and it was only a flash, lol.

well done,

5/5 Ingrid

I enjoy my read. You create such a vivid imagery and we could all pictured ourselves having experience this. Very well done for me, kel.

Love it, I could recognise my own (very often) zoning out in it.

I would love to make this comment more constructive, but I can only repeat the words of your previous readers. The flow could use some work, but not that much. When you daydream everything is a bit hazy, so why shouldn't your poem be too.

I loved this one, better than your next two I might say.