Comments : Focus

  • 13 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    I enjoyed this Poem,
    hinting of Haiku
    and Senyru.
    I find your words
    a required emergence
    from the deep

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Really's not a do-over;
    It's a not-done-yet.

    ^^
    LArry as I always say you're poetry is an opened book, and each time I flip a page I learn a new lesson..
    amazing :)
    5/5