/but in the shadow of my hair
is a crown I wear with pride,
and as the light caresses my skin
my raven tresses curl and shine.//
woowww what beautiful imagery ... I could visualize it so well :)

brilliant write.

I love the unique senses you bring here, almost enlivening the air around me! I admire your use of alliteration in the first stanza, and how your thoughts flow so magically and prosaically together. Just the imagery was enough to grasp onto, and then you bring such expressive gems to the eye! I like how you expel your power here!

Amazing write, congratulations and hope you get more reads, people will truly be blown away!

God bless always.
~MaryAnne

Sorry, I meant mosaically, wrong start to the word. Your words were anything but dull, but reminded me of such pictures overflowing with great honor....congrats again!

Congrats on your win a very well deserved one :)
~~~Clapping~~~Clapping~~~
*hugs
Cindy

Wow... I could imagine that clearly. I for one haven't seen snow, but when I read your poem I felt it so familiar. I like the way you personalized the season and how you didn't mention cold as something that came along with snow. I found your poem warm and welcoming, with a sense of you in it... it was a pleasure to read, keep it up!

My fav stanza

For in the wells of solitude,
the world is mine, its walls to wear
and upon the bleak, cold breaths
of mistral winds rejoice
For I am she, the Winter Queen.

very good line. specially the last line of the above stanza... i can fee.. it all from your heart. great piece of writing. my friend..

This is truly beautiful.. The flow.. The usage of words..
I felt a shivery rush as I don't know why... you reminded me of a song ICE QUEEN by Within Temptations!
It was sensational as you are a QUEEN :D

I forget sometimes just how beautiful your poems are. This was written with the style of the queen :-)
Excellent

Awesome !

I like it

Remind me once more
when silence fills one's memory
of a thousand tears or more,
to awake in a land of hypnotic beauty
I shan't fear the gray, of glacial ground.

Well done

This is beautiful. You are an amazing poet. For the longest time I believed poetry was about rhyming, reading pieces like this are an absolute reminder of how amazing poetry can be. With such vivid imagery. I could see the entire poem as I was reading it.. You're amazing, great job..5/5

I love it and it makes something inside me stir