Comments : Torn apart

  • 13 years ago

    by Stephy

    Choose the one your heart calls you for the most. The one your most comfortable with. The one you feel you can trust more. The one you can see yourself with the most. The one who treats you the best.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Very beautiful. The expression of love and not know which direction to turn, not knowing if losing one means gaining something better.
    Truly Amazing!

  • 13 years ago

    by IBRAHIM DWIDAR

    Again u prove ur abilities girl, this poem was so good, i liked the way u describe ur confusion here a lot, u could really describe it very well and again u didn't miss the rhyme, the melody is still flows through all the poem, i give u 5/5