The moment i saw the title of this poem i already knew i was going to love it and before i had ever cliccked to view it i was so excited to read it because you never ever fail to amaze me with your ability to write the most amazing and beautiful poetry!! no matter what its never ever anything other than amazing!!

there is seriously absolutely NO fault in this poem. so often people will have a little mistake here or there but this truly was perfect!!

amd the images were so vivid and real. i truly loved it 11/5 :)

Wonderful. Love the imagery. 5/5

I feel this piece could've been much stronger if it had a tighter rhythm. Each line needs to finish to the same beat. Also, I think you can get away with saying 'mistakes' instead of 'mistake' at the end of the second line. It would make it a stronger rhyme.

I did like how it started, though. Just the idea of they powerful, deadly, mythical creature is at a bus stop. The juxtaposition is great.

Brad

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I can imagine the place . The rain .. Everything

i like the story behind this ..

I love it Kris. You always write great poems!

...wow...i really like this one...good job Kris:D

Great job! can see the poem reveal like a movie before my eyes as I read it. Great imagery!

I like this ....really good :)