Comments : What Truly Hurts

  • 12 years ago

    by anonymous

    Thats ssoo sad but that is a real good poem! you can feel the emotion and the sadness, the pain, the hurt you felt when he left.. 10/10

  • 11 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    I agree thats what truly hurts but I love this poem I like this stanza

    "So you let them inside your walls,
    as your guard tumbles and sinks,
    until they're part of your life,
    sewn right at the very seems.

    I like how you mentioned sewn into this because thats how it goes when you let someone in, either a friend or love....its a tragic poem but you wrote it well :)