Comments : I thought i was

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Oh excellent Yaki. I think a lot of us have been to this point in our lives. Sometimes we have someone or a situation we are trying to get over and move on from but somehow we always fall back after we've got so much better and accepted the way things were. It's kind of like taking a two steps forward and three steps back. You just don't feel like you're going anywhere. Awesome write, I loved what you had to say.

  • 13 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is a powerful realization you have come here that I think is a big plummeting points of all of our lives...thank you dearly for your kind and honest thoughts on my poetry, and for the time you share.......I liked the layout of this piece, how you have something planned, this piece of a relationship perhaps, but we always fall back into it and can't find ourselves moving onto new destinations.

    An emotional write, really moved me in many ways.
    Thank you for writing and God bless as always!