A beautiful encouraging message to hold onto God's covenant, indeed He will help us follow that path, that plan for us....just fix your misspelling of "head", and my only other suggestion would be to find a stronger simile than "silent as a mouse", I felt you could have used more of a spiritual one...

Overall, a very thoughtful write, we need to recognize the value of life...Thanks for sharing and reading my work as well!

Have a blessed Sunday!