Comments : The Lion's Tavern (Senyru)

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Dear Michael,

    I had a quick brownse through this man's biography. Is he someone you know?

    I like the Senryu, it is very powerful. Somtimes these short verses leave such a deep impression upon the reader:)

    I feel this must be a really great singer, so will Youtube on him lateron!

    You can always tell when a person does something with all of their heart, you captured that well within your words:)

    Well done!

    ((hugs))

    5/5 Ingrid x

  • 13 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    A respectable piece for a respectable man! I think that it's amazing that you chose the Senryu form to describe him. Almost like capturing him in his moment of peace and happiness. Brilliant work!
    Take care

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    Wow. That was... superb. Conjured up a lot of beautiful images. 5/5

    mandy :)