The Underpass (Untraditional Haiku)

by Soft Parade   Mar 21, 2011


Canopy overhead

Haunting nocturnal density

Cement footstep chills

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A Haiku is usually about nature, I did a little take on this for a man made structure - The Underpass

Syllable structure in place 5-7-5, unrhymed.

It's a Japanese form used for nature poetry.

Please rate and comment. If you have different takes on forms let me know, I love diversity.
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  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I loved this diction in this piece very dark and gloomy :] Nice work keep it up. And if you ever want to try some different forms look for a potet named Jad on the site he's always using different forms. -Nik

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