Comments : My love for you

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    This is cute Kelwin :)

    I like the rhyme in the first stanza but in the second one it seems a little repetitive. But that is ok.

    Hmm, I don't know but I think any girl would be lucky to have a poem written about them that was like this.

    My favorite part:

    "i would do anything for you
    my love is pure
    my heart is true"

    I dont know why I like it so much but it just works. It is that sweet and sappy kind of love thing that I am a huge sucker for. Nice one.