This is a really uplifting piece. It has faith and signs that we all eventually learn and heal from life. Your flow was excellent in this so don't worry about it so much. Lovely use of words and it holds a comforting message. Brilliant write : )

Danika
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Oh lovie :') what a heartbreaking write....I love this...first of all I want to point out the creativity in here...they were some beautiful images...and the wisdom in your words....beautiful... I must say the ending was my favorite part it kinda takes the weight of the sadness in the poem... Such a nostalgic bittersweet write...can't wait to see more of you...your poems are always a joy to read... -Mwaaa