WOWWWWWWWWWW what a amazing
piece rhyming and the flow perfect, and
the words man what can I say. so sad
so relatable to to many people. there is
way to much pain in the world and I hope
this is the only life I get. I might come back as a happy person in a happy life
but then I might not and I just don't
want to risk it so that why I hope this is
it. TOO MUCH PAIN TO DO IT AGAIN

5/5 excellent poem

F**ken awesome. I myself am an alcoholic and have been for 5 years.. This piece I find I relate to, it's amazing.. Thank you

5/5

I really appreciated this poem its really nice, I've gone through some dark days like these but never to the extreme, i know what its like to swallow a 5th to get rid of pain but anyway good intense poem and nice rhyming too :)