Thanks a lot eric i really appreciat

Beautiful poem Mira, i like it a lot specially the last part

every time you need her and don't want her
but when you realize that you just want her
she leave you and go away

this was really great, because he didn't notice her she disappeared at last when he started to demand her, i like that idea a lot.

great one really mire, i gave u 5/5

Thank a lot ibrahim

Nice one , loved it !!!
agree with Ibrahim i gave u 5/5

Thanks siham a lot

Abit confusing but a lot of emotion behind this poem