Comments : Lose..

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ohhhhhhh how sad..I love those moments spending time alone thinking about life and the things that went wrong...And the beach! Perfect place to do it! Its almost soothing and less sad when you put your place somewhere beautiful!

    This was short Yaki, I wish you would of dragged it on because I love your work I always want to read more doll!
    :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    Short yet just as powerful as any other. Being lost in ones thoughts is truly an adventure of the darkest kind, coming to realize a lot of realities and truths you dont want to face. It creates such a loneliness..

    "watching as the sun melts"
    ^I loved this line, a perfect way to describe a sunset, when one feels like this. Definitiely original.

    Brilliant work!
    Take care