Love this poem Mira!
I can relate!
its feels like part of you is taken away when you lose someone that it feels like life will never be the same... Nice write

Thanks alot emma

Sometimes letting go is the most painful thing especially if you still in love ... so confusin' cuz i used to feel in that way .
well done Mira 5/5

I liked that alot mira, there is certain melody inside that poem which i really liked, also the feelings were so impressive, well done

Very deeep words.. i like the way of your writing its straightforward... good

Wow... amazing poem
love it

A very nice one ! A kind of write that one can easily relate to. :)

I thought the pain in your words and the emotion in this was very real and very poetic. Great job!

The hardest thing to do is say good by yur message was stated clearly, the poem has ure emotion 5/5

A nice poem..:)

When you said that you should go
all i was looking for
now is just disappear
but i don't mind if you promise
that you'll be here again
that you'll take away my pain

this part of poem said it all, feelings in this poem are so true , love it. zabardast.

Great poem :) well done, fluent complexion of words

This was simply beautiful.

Realy nice..

So great=)keep write more!

So great=)keep write more!

I love hw true this poem is. I love the words and thought u put in

It hurts when somebody we love doesn't love us back or doesn't know how we feel for them...
It's a very sad poem, beautifully written!
Good job!

This is in amazing poem I like it alot

Moved with your Genuine feelings. "I can't let you go because I love you more often than I show". The most most most loving and romantic line I have ever read in my whole life. This line has made you a perfect & true lover and poet both.