Comments : Angel In My Life (Acrostic)

  • 11 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Our children will always be our babies no matter how old they are, at least mine is. The birth is a day I will never forget. Good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jad

    A very special poem that can only make one feel loved and special and bring a smile to the face. Your words are heart filled and can so easily be understood with the way you describe how this person makes you feel. The poem itself was really nice. It had a good flow and the rhyming was good as well although there are parts of the rhyming that seemed force. But in the end is getting your emotions out and you did a wonderful job with that.

    In all, I love the way you tell this story and how you keep the mood of the poem so cheerful and happy. I can see the love so easily that you are writing down and trying to describe it. So before I continue on forever and ever, just let me say that this poem really touched me and I'm sure its touched those who have loved ones in their arms or had loved ones. Great job and keep writing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kuro

    Absolutely wonderful. i have no children of my own, but i want some when the time (and person) is right. every line was heart felt and really enjoyed this. i added it to my favorites, gave it 5/5 and nominated into the weekly contest. i went back to read it, and then i noticed it was an acrostic, which made it all the more impressive in my opinion.

    nicely done :)


  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    This took me back in time.....What a special time that is when our children are born. Your piece is filled with so much feeling of what a Mother feels for her babies.
    Beautiful Acrostic.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Very special poem from a special mother. This relation of parent & child is simply a blessing & i too thank God for making me part of it.
    Loved your poem as i could so easily relate to it and just close my eyes and smile.

    Great write friend

    all the best and take care

  • 11 years ago

    by yogi73

    This is very touching and beautiful. I'm a father and I can easily relate to this poem as well... very nice