Hannah my doll your beautiful just the way you are and no one should ever hurt you or tell you that your emo there is NOTHING wrong with being different. I think your beautiful and ilove you girly<3

~Ali-Cat <3

JSS

Very good Hannah. This poem you got here is awesome. The repetition of the verses with variations, girl that is brilliant and the way you used that technique, perfect. For me, I really do believe this one is the best poem youve written. CMS!!! :D

Well that girl got my attention! All of what you say is so true. My heart goes out to you in such a way I can't explain it. Don't worry about what they say...it doesn't matter...what matters is you! Be good to yourself because there are plenty of people who will not....Good writing..thanks for sharing..5/5

Great writing i hope u dont feel that way xx 5/5

Another great piece, i have been reading your work and your amazing i love this especially the line
"I am mad at the world"

lots of love shisana
5/5 please return the favor^_^

Another great piece, i have been reading your work and your amazing i love this especially the line
"I am mad at the world"

lots of love shisana
5/5 please return the favor^_^

Another great piece, i have been reading your work and your amazing i love this especially the line
"I am mad at the world"

lots of love shisana
5/5 please return the favor^_^

Wow, that girl can write extreamly well. This is amazing!

This is so very different than what I normally read but I love how emotional it is :) verrrrry good 5/5

This is so very different than what I normally read but I love how emotional it is :) verrrrry good 5/5

I was that girl, but I made myself start to feel better, and have more confidence. I still wear heavy makeup, and my wardrobe is mostly black, but thats not "emo" its just me. =) great poem by the way.

Nicely written. really understand those feelings.
But like someone else said too in a comment..
it doesnt matter what other people say. your amazing just the way you are, just be yourself (: 5/5

-blackstar

Awwww sweetie this is so Sad th bit were you wrote

The girl covered in scars of her pain and loss?
She may not look it, but she's insecure.
That girl may not act like she does, but she truly hates herself.
She's mad at the world.
She has problems controlling her anger.
She actually has feelings. She feels pain.
She's mad at the people who call her "emo" and tell her to cut herself.
She is mad at herself for using that dull blade to make impressions in her skin.
She is mad at herself for making her loved ones hurt.

That ^^ was so sad and so emotional
I can totally feel your pain threw this poem(:

I loved it your amazging at writing darl(:
100/100 for sure

X

Its mutual dude loved it :)