I love it so stronge and true
well done you knew how to pic the words
nice work

Are u ok??

Are u ok??

I love the flow of this poem
When the time comes you will not be defeated... You are a strong person!
nice write!
Remember Im always here to listen to you if you want someone to write too :)
5/5

The poem is long though but it is worth reading..!

I am so astonished! I have read some of your poems, but this one I avoided. I don't know why I did but I did. So today I decided to read it.

Now I highly regret avoiding this poem for so long. The title struck me as a slang.. which meant I made the assumption that it wouldn't be as hmm.. what's the word. It wouldn't be as "steady."

My favorite verse would probably be the one that is short yet meaningful.

The seventh verse was my favorite! The rhyming was so smooth, and the wording was amazing. When I read this verse I was simply amazed and didn't continue the poem after a few minutes. I could feel the emoticon and I really like that in a poem.

As for the rest of the poem, it was intense.
I loved it as much as the seventh verse, the rhyming was effortless, like you weren't even trying.

Contine the loving writing!(:

I am so astonished! I have read some of your poems, but this one I avoided. I don't know why I did but I did. So today I decided to read it.

Now I highly regret avoiding this poem for so long. The title struck me as a slang.. which meant I made the assumption that it wouldn't be as hmm.. what's the word. It wouldn't be as "steady."

My favorite verse would probably be the one that is short yet meaningful.

The seventh verse was my favorite! The rhyming was so smooth, and the wording was amazing. When I read this verse I was simply amazed and didn't continue the poem after a few minutes. I could feel the emoticon and I really like that in a poem.

As for the rest of the poem, it was intense.
I loved it as much as the seventh verse, the rhyming was effortless, like you weren't even trying.

Contine the loving writing!(:

Am I a loser, Or something else

The millennium question, something everyone ask one day or another. But that same question comes to our thoughts at any point of our life.

The poem was long, yes. I was tempted to read it because of the title and i just skipped it and read another one but the title kept luring me in.

It was worth the read, your word choice was great. The flow too.
You stated your point.

This is without any doubt my favorite part:

"I Will Fight what the devil finds amusing
Which the rest us find exhaustingly confusing"

The last stanza has so descriptive. It shows how you feel. and the way the words are scattered shows a messed. And that's how i depict you while i was reading this.

really good, I hope that by writing this you are feeling better.