This is definitely well written. When I read your words, I see a child trying to please thier parents, and because of that they pretty much throw away their dreams. Brilliant write!
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I loved this one girl...it was so dif. from your usual style of writing but it really worked for this poem.

This was very good the images in your words came to mind... Good rhymes and very well written! Also loved the end of this poem:)

This was very good the images in your words came to mind... Good rhymes and very well written! Also loved the end of this poem:)