Sad and beautiful at the same time..... keep them coming girl

Its very beautiful.... the second to last stanza doesn't feet because you say
It doesn't feel right
And well of couse you have to assume people already know that from the 1st and 2nd
But reallly good flow and ryhme
So great job.

Its very beautiful.... the second to last stanza doesn't feet because you say
It doesn't feel right
And well of couse you have to assume people already know that from the 1st and 2nd
But reallly good flow and ryhme
So great job.