Comments : Unlike Me

  • 10 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Wow Dib. This was deep.
    I really, really loved this poem.
    The lines that really jumped out at me were:
    "I have been standing 'neath the stars for too long,
    holding on to lies, too strong.
    That's just fear."

    I relate to this so well, as you know. It's not good to hold on to lies.
    The only reason I do, well, you know why...
    And fear prevents you from letting the lies go.

    Again, REALLY LOVED it. (:

    5/5

    CMS DIBBY!

  • 10 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Wow Dib. This was deep.
    I really, really loved this poem.
    The lines that really jumped out at me were:
    "I have been standing 'neath the stars for too long,
    holding on to lies, too strong.
    That's just fear."

    I relate to this so well, as you know. It's not good to hold on to lies.
    The only reason I do, well, you know why...
    And fear prevents you from letting the lies go.

    Again, REALLY LOVED it. (:

    5/5

    CMS DIBBY!

  • 10 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Lol double post.

  • 10 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    I really love this how it is dont change anything it has a way different kinda flow, but its still flow!!! LOVE IT!!!!
    5/5
    ~Miss Courtney =)

  • 10 years ago

    by mira

    Wow i love it
    it just diffrent and wonderful and i loved also the titel unlike me
    well done

  • 10 years ago

    by kimara4955

    Really good poem, filled with emotion so deep, its different from anything ive read, thts why i love it more, i liked the flow and repitive stanzas. great peice. 5/5.
    take care
    xkimx

  • 10 years ago

    by StormyStar

    You are so inspirational :)
    I love tha rain and stars and you just reminded me why :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Reading this makes me feel .... wishful, wondering, and maybe a bit small. The vast expanse of the sky , rain and cloud bring us to a state of depression at times and yet, when the rain stops the sun appears how clean and fresh it all is. Same with our lives, the rain that falls only refreshes
    Awesome write, would make a great song
    xox Connie

  • 10 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    Deep and emotional...so wonderful...i love the choice of words.

  • 10 years ago

    by Amreen

    I just loved this piece..heart-touching...:))

  • 9 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Very emotional poem and really inspired me a lot to write another poem, hehe", The word of choice is good and everything was written perfect. Good job. Keep writing more:))
    ~C

  • 9 years ago

    by Emily

    This is wonderfully written! So easy to relate to and picture clearly!

  • 8 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    Forgiven violation of LAWgic

  • 8 years ago

    by Lori Lee

    Kinda sad but very lovely poem..good descriptions 5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hmmm...my, so wonderful! :-)