This is such a touching and beautiful tribute to mothers, those still with us and those who have passed. Great rhythm and rhyme, love the structure poetically, it's amazing. Very emotional and truly tugged at my heartstrings. Beautifully written :)

Larry is this amazing, i love ur rhyme schemes..u never ever need to force and i like the messages and emotions that u make sure to have the poem stuffed with.

i loved the flow and the dedication here..
am touched as well :)
ur wife is lucky and so if ur mother!

well done
5/5

This is beautiful. Moms are the best, to bad they are not around forever.