Comments : White Freedom

  • 12 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    You got a talent for choosing beautiful yet not that "big" words. and you used them wonderfully. i like your poem. its beautiful. :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    A beautiful description about those wonderful white islands of the sky. Most definitely an enjoyable read. Great work!
    Take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Jon914

    This may be about your inability to experiance a full range of emotion ( freedom), you envy that which can change its temperment at will. I can relate. nice work :)