This is jjuust inspiring...I feel like I read this and when i didnt see my comment, I killed my doubt..however the word ripple is one of my very favorites!
I enjoy your poetry..it's more like art, real art I can find lots of profession in the way you draw whats in ur mind by the words you choose.
From car on the bridge
ringing on the creek below
^like this is just thought provoking and visual !
its so crystal clear
fleeting glimpse: ripples
giving proof life is sustained
separate from office dash.
^
out of breath larry. you are a very inspiring poet, and I seriously find a lot to learn from you