I haven't read much of your poems, but i have to say in my opinion this is one of your best works. a wonderful tale of ending youth written with death allegory, very good. i must say "Cold to the touch, made of iron and stone" was your best line. As always i encourage that not all poems need to rhyme and as i can see with your choice of words you can definetly write a poem just as beautiful.

HS

I felt this poem and I really liked it. Good work!

I felt this poem and I really liked it. Good work!