Love your work puffy, i have really enjoyed reading your poetry. this poem is like my dream, i'm a hopless romantic, << sad i know, but thats me and i dont care, hehe, and would love to feel that connection with someone, and let the dream become reality. great work hun, 5/5,
take care
xxkimxx

A poem of tenderness and hope. I really enjoyed reading it.
You did an excellent job of making the reader feel your words instead of just seeing them.
Super Connie

This was another intriguing piece by you, I really enjoyed reading it, and the descriptions of the sceneary around you and this girl was fantastic. Good job ((5))
~Harlea