THIS IS AN OFF THE CHAIN PIECE :)
I so liked reading it..
Metaphorically, the images were flawless as the seasons gave a beautiful way to describe the situation with the lover.. Indeed, seasons come and seasons go, and we still cling to our past.
This was MARVELOUS..
The intro was alluring: "Calendar pages fall.." -- what a simple but perfect way to begin a piece.

"The spring flowers started to die
When the winter froze my soul
But Summer's heat burned my heart
After all the autumn leaves fall" --- This stanza is close to perfection metaphorically, structurally, and emotionally.

I was amazed by the organized flow of every verse and the links in between. Well, I find it hard myself to organize ideas, but you nailed it!

I suggest you add question marks here, for they make the shape and the content better: "So are you breathing my air
Or am I breathing yours
And are you wandering out there
Or locked behind closed doors"

The closing was breathtaking:

"I can no longer tolerate the unknown
So to the presence of agony I bow
Asking the places you left behind
Where are you, tell me where are you now ? "

It was a great way to end your idea.

EXCELLENT -_-
5/5

Love love love this.
great flow, beautiful poem and generally good word choice :)
5/5

Best poem ever 5/5

I love poems that include nature, this is beutifully written and i loved every word, your description was perfect, and powerful. your a very talented writer and i enjoy reading your work. 5/5.
xxkimxx

So sad... so many emotions, so many seconds of pain stitched together in 2 a poem so so so wonderful in its own way.... keep it up... simply too good...;)

Wel,written agn..

Its a sad piece but written very bueatifully i give you props you should exactly how you felt making the reader feel the same way
Raindrops 5/5

Amazing poem...

"So are you breathing my air
Or am I breathing yours
And are you wandering out there
Or locked behind closed doors"

this is beautiful.

5.5

Nyc.. love your poem... Perfect..

What a heart wrenching poem... you've expressed the emotions in beautiful way...!!
Well done.. 5/5

Nice