Comments : WHY IS IT??

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is cool, and very true. Good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    Follow your heart...sometimes it is a test of yourself but it is always true to you.......5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    First of all I love this poem
    I was just aww when I finished reading it. Though I can feel some sort of frustration from this piece perhaps its was just a one sided love.
    I think the "i's" need to be capitalize.. and use question marks when its needed to make this poem more appealing.
    Here are my suggestions.

    Why is it
    that I promise myself
    not to talk to you again?
    but the moment
    I get a glimpse of you
    I forget all about it.

    Why is it
    that I pledge to myself
    not to message you?
    but the moment
    I see your name
    flashing in my inbox
    I forget all about it.

    Why is it
    that I try to make
    myself strong
    to not to love you again?
    but the moment
    I hear your voice
    my heart start beating
    aloud saying
    I LOVE YOU!!!