Comments : Autumn

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    This is very cool :-) it flows so well, it paints such great visuals great work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lu

    Mel, I have so many things I want to say and they are all trying to come out at the same time ... lol

    You're heart is beauty and your words give me strength. The feeling that no matter what happens or what has happened in my life the harshest of times will fade and everything will be beautiful again.

    Bark fraying at her heels,
    foliage dancing,
    branches twirled into
    a protective stance.
    ^^^
    I so love this part for I know you know how much it means to me.

    I have read each word over and over many times and each time it touches my heart again and again.
    Even though age and distance separate us, a million stars could never tear us apart.

    You are a wonderful person with a beautiful heart and a very dear friend who is never far from my thoughts ~huggggggggggggggs~

    I will cherish your words FOREVER !!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Congrats <3 :) ofcourse well deserved

  • 12 years ago

    by xx stacy xx

    Beautiful. The way u fel, full of passion and love. Whell deserved and keep writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by sibyllene

    This is a lovely tribute to a lovely woman. Your words are... I want to say "mythical." Would that make sense? They have a sort of classic, enduring beauty. Romantic and mystical, and very fitting for this poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    A most beautiful work of admiration. The consonace in this poem is astounding, as is the alliteration. I wish I had the Muse as Yous! Peace and Blessings

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    A beautiful heart-warming write! 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    Beautiful of expressing fellings ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I dont know if you know, Autumn's Dream poem, by me!
    But this poem by you means a lot for me, and i always come 2 read i again..so thought this time 2 tell u, i was here again..and well deserved :)