WOW girl!
Definately made my heart beat reading this!
I love it!
its flows very nicely and I can feel this love you share!
5/5

Great write very strong and full of life and passion. It really pulls you in from the first word to the very last. Nicely done with the flow and formatting. Keep it up. 5/5

When I think of your sexy voice
It reminds me of the smooth whiskey of my choice.

these lines made the poems for me..so original and creative, good work

Lovely easy flow ........with short stanzas. 'Reminds me of the smooth whiskey of my choice'-love that line :) ...very original .