Comments : Lost hope

  • 13 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I would suggest putting this in a quote
    or having it be a short poem, but depicting
    more of what it felt like in your pocket, unused,
    and how you felt when it was stolen.

    The idea was really heartbreaking.
    But I like the idea that we all have some
    amount of hope in our pocket,
    some use it fully, some let it sit
    without any emotions.....soon time
    will take it, someone who is desperate,
    leaving you just as lonely.

    Interesting take, hope to read more!
    Welcome to P n Q!