Flows perfectly I think ...

This is one interesting read - I like the Idea actually ... nice job gIrl :D

I really liked this piece it's reads in well and is true of lots of people we have all worn marks at some point :) as usual prom the heart and fantastic :) :)

Wow you really managed to do something that I havent went for, since a long while..
this is an amazing piece with amazing word choice!

I love the mode of your opening stanza, it's very interesting and interlingual with its dark suspense,,,jhust loved it..

this was my favorite:

You spot her a mile way
So you start with the walk

(Y)
and thissssss

Once you are done, you come back to me
But I know you are different than any man

^very very interesting MeeeMEEE
with an eppiic ending
5/5

Its sad poem... really dark. and u created a good image. so reader can imagine all the story behind it.. good idea and work

This was really good and unique you wrote this really well and everyone can understand the story really good peice 5/5

This poem was very interesting as it sort of told a story. I felt you penned a great poem here. 5/5