Dont let me go

by Amber   Jul 3, 2011


A boy and a girl
Being just best friends
Till another girl came along
Their friendship had to soon end

More and more
She slowly took him away
It hurt her more and more
Each and every day

She cried and cried
Every night
Layed in her bed
And turned off all the lights

They soon lost contact
And haven't talked in a while
It was over
But she was still in denial

She wrote many Poems about him
Like how he made her sad
And about there friendship
The one they once had

He finally called one day
And said his girlfriend broke his heart
And how she said them awful words
"We should be apart"

She hung up the phone quickly
Because she couldn't find anything to say
Then she finally realized
Maybe it should be this way

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is a really nice poem in my opinion. The way you've started gives the reader the possibility to get into the story since you tell how everything used to be. I enjoyed how you continued. I'm sure quite a few have experienced this xactly the way you've described before. The rhyme wasn't always clear to me but that's allright. Emotions have been expressed well and i'm convinced this is a really heartfelt write. Thanks for sharing and keep up writing!

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