Comments : The New Me (Hates the Old You)

  • 9 years ago

    by The Queen

    Loved the smooth flow and the subtle rhyme in this piece. It seems like you always write from the heart. Keep it up!

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow. This is amazing. The flow is nice, and yes the rhyme is as well, but what really catches my eye here is the emotion. It is strong and stands out, but it also carries the whole of this piece. I love this, excellent job.