Wow. An extremly powerful poem about a sad situation. I really enjoyed it although it was sad. A great poem overall.
Keep writing =)

~Kelly

sad poem... but brilliant one =) i loved your piece =) anyway thank u for posting a comment on mine =) oh i gave urs a 5=) ciao

sorrow is such a... raw emotion, i guess is what i want to say.... and you know how they say depression is an outcry for help... well in my case its an outcry for attention.... see, i shouldnt even be telling you this... but i am cuz i want that attention and the pity.... im such a pathetic human being...
loves and hugs
Manda Lynn