Comments : Weight In My Chest

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I really liked this poem a lot. I loved how you opened the poem. I am sure many people will relate to this

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I am sure each of us have woken up to this
    heaviness at one point in our life and I know
    what it is like.a touching write where the flow was smooth...take care.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    So much pain , sadness, hurt and devastation in your words ...that have touched my very heart & core. ( Maybe because I can relate to them...) Keep holding on dear poet, there is ALWAYs light at the end of the tunnel and brighter days :) .. (don't lose hope, for hope it gives us light...)

    Take care & keep penning! :)