I think the message is presented very clearly your heart not made of stone it can only take so much very well said , i really like the flow of this piece 5/5 amazing writer x

The heart works in mysterious ways...
It gets hurt, played, and torn but still isn't fazed.
great

The heart works in mysterious ways...
It gets hurt, played, and torn but still isn't fazed.
great

The heart works in mysterious ways...
It gets hurt, played, and torn but still isn't fazed.
great

That message replays in my mind even now....although the tragedies present themselves in such brutal ways, you can still be loved, and love is still present.

Creative thoughts and brilliant words you used, I felt as if everything flowed in harmony and that message is resonating.

Good work, God bless you!
~MaryAnne

Thank you so much! :)

Good job its clear that you what a truly broken heart is. Keep Going :)

This was a great poem heather keep up the great work.. please rate and comment my poems please thank you.

Again a poem that is true and strong i love it, keep it up!

I like you subject here. The heart, wow the endless pieces that will continue to be writen on the subject. Hearts are like snowflakes in that, there are no two the same. Beautiful, yet fragile while being incredibly durable as well. You have summed it all up pretty well in this piece. I enjoyed the opportunity to review your work.